Happy Birthday!(35 words story)


Little Mia saw a crying man across the street. „What’s wrong?”she asked. „My boy would have been five today…” „Well, Happy Birthday!”she said, giving him her doll and smiling. He burst into tears.

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7 Responses to Happy Birthday!(35 words story)

  1. what a touching move. I think I’d burst into tears too if I were that man.

  2. sharimoreno says:

    Hi. That is touching. I believe we all should return to these kinds of daily “little kindnesses.” What are some things you all could think of to do? I think a smile is a start but a errand run for a neighbor is better. :)

  3. I think I love your 35 word stories. They’re all brilliant!

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  5. deanabo says:

    What a tremendous loss. Great job capturing the emotions.

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